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Our topic :
IPhone 4 iOS 4.3 vs Samsung Galaxy S2 Andriod 2.3 Google Apps
We have identified the main points. They are:

1) IPhone iOS 4.3
Advantages:
  • iOS is very simple to use
  • Effective and Efficient
  • Strongly Secure from Hackers
  • Simple and Easy to Repair, re-programing and Updates(Frees)
  • Very Ecosystem n Humanity system "smoothest, most consistent"
  • New Version and Upgrade is moving fast and faster

Disadvantages
  • self-serving (Apple Store)
  • Not appeal to everyone
  • Doesn’t allow any Flash content (Google Apps)

2) Andriod 2.3 Google Apps
Advantages:
  • Highly customizable
  • Nothing is complex
  • Settings are easy to access
  • Familiar with other computers
  • Has Flash content on Android

Disadvantages:
  • Problem with browsing performance
  • Unintelligible error messages and requires more taps to accomplish common tasks
  • Android phones don't ship with the latest version of the operating system


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Android 2.3 Google Apps (Samsung Galaxy S2)
Apple iOS 4.3 (IPhone 4)
Similarities
1) Multi Touch Screen
1) Multi Touch Screen
Differences
A) Large Screen (4.3")
A) A bit Small Screen (3.5")
B) Less Sharper Display because of Low Resolution (800x430 pixels)
B) More Batter Resolution (960x640) makes more Sharper Display
C) Lack of performed on Play Video and Browsing
C) Best performed on Picture viewing and Play Video


Similarities

2) Camera
2) Camera
Differences

A) 8 M.Pixels (Better Resolution)
A) 5 M.Pixels (Less Resolution)
B) Best for Photography
B) Normal Resolution for Picture
C) FULL HD video recording 1080 Pixel
C) 720 Pixel (Less FULL HD) Video recording
D) Handling more video formats and codecs in 1080P
D) Apple video formats and codecs in 720P


Similarities

3) Ecosystem&Application
3) Ecosystem&Application
Differences

A) Less Ecosystem
A) More Ecosystem
B) Lack of quality and optimization on Apps
B) More quality and optimization Apps
C) Less Apps can be find
C) The iPhone still has the most apps, the best apps, the most innovative apps
D) Third-party software
D) Original Software from Apple




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Take a look our Video :
New Generation of Software : iOS 5
Get Your IPad 2 : iOS 4
Andriod 2.3
New Samsung Galaxy S2 Review : Andriod 2.3
Samsung Galaxy Tab : Andriod 2.3
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